Showing posts with label Longlist 2018. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Longlist 2018. Show all posts

Friday, 5 October 2018

Short Story Longlist 2018, Bhagyashree Mishra

The Milkman

In a sparsely populated industrial town of Odisha, Piyush lived along with his wife Priya and daughter Preeti. Endowed with wildlife sanctuaries and parks the scenic beauty epitomised solitude. Dense forests bestowed with a variety of flora and fauna attracted picnickers. Meandering Mahanadi passed through nature’s bosom. Awe-inspiring was the view of lush green plants swaying on hill slopes.

Preeti, an adorable little girl of three, sometimes visited these tourist spots with her parents. Urban lifestyle and its sophistication helped them live comfortably. Piyush worked with a mining and quarrying private sector company. He was the sole bread winner of his family. Though Priya chose to quit her job and be a homemaker, yet the toddler’s hilarious activities filled her soul with the joys of spring. Mother and daughter spent quality time caching memories. Often at sunset they visited the nearby parks. Slides, swings and seesaws were all that the little one asked for. Preeti’s amicable nature awarded her many friends. Parks lent her a million reasons to amuse.

In a wintry evening, around eight in the evening, Piyush received a mail out of the blue. It was his third attempt for a government sector job that had brought him laurels. Within a month, his family shifted to the new location. Away from cacophony, vehicular emissions and rampant smoke from industrial exhausts they had moved onto a remote area. Only the rattling pots, swashing of sea, fluttering birds and clucking hens broke the silence. The trio took many days to adapt themselves to the remote lifestyle.

Almost everyday Preeti wailed for she missed her friends. And unfortunately, there was no park in their surrounding. Kids in the village ran after butterflies, rolled worn out vehicle tyres, swung on aerial roots of banyan, jumped on muddy puddles and chased small animals. Mollycoddled Preeti could hardly imagine playing these games. Preeti’s tantrums escalated for her parents couldn’t provide her rides on slides or swings. Surprisingly, even toffees, ice-creams and pastries lagged at consoling the little heart. One fine evening, Priya unbolted the door at Mr. Ramakrishna’s knock, a man perhaps of forty. He had come to deliver milk. Priya took the bottle of milk and went into the kitchen. Ramakrishna taught students in the village’s primary school. But to augment his meagre income, he relied on cattle. He was kind and hardworking and considered no job to be below his stature. Finding a toddler with tearful eyes, quivered Rama’s heart. He thought of sharing her pain. Thus he waved his hand lovingly, gesturing her to come near him.

Without wondering for a while, she ran to him as if she had found a friend in him. Piyush and Priya rushed to their living room upon listening the toddler’s tinkling anklets running outdoor. Both of them heaved a sigh of relief upon seeing their ward laughing at her loudest. Tears of joy rolled down their cheeks viewing the toddler swing. The Milkman was singing a melodious song and cradling the angle in his towel. Four of them sparkled a score of smiles. This turned to be an everyday affair. Preeti’s ears eagerly waited for the tinkling bell in the evening. Rama would come, take the little one in his arms, sing and cradle her. An array of chuckles the child spread out, eased all his aches.

Post few years of his service in the rural area, Piyush was once more transferred to the town. Unfortunately the Milkman and the toddler could no longer meet or interact or laugh out loud. Both of them moved on in their lives but their voids could never be filled. Everyday on his way to sell milk, the Milkman would pause outside a vacant house for few seconds, pull out a photograph from his shirt’s pocket, flash a smile, shed some tears and pass by. The house was where the adorable little girl dwelt in once.

The little girl grew up in the next two decades. Within these years, Preeti and Priya tried reaching out Ramakrishna over the telephone. Alas! All efforts in vain. Each time they heard it as -” The dialed number doesn’t exist, please check your directory and dial again”. Nonetheless, the honey sweet memories leaped over fallouts of technology. Preeti manyatimes recalled those times spent in the remote area. In her diary, she had mentioned about how grateful she was to meet Rama uncle. She completed her schooling with fair grades. She went on to pursue her Bachelor’s degree from Harvard University in the United States. Despite being in a foreign land, whenever she drank a mug of milk, her subconscious mind reminisced Rama uncle and his ways of pampering her younger version. Post graduating from the Harvard, Preeti was offered jobs by renowned multinational companies with handsome packages. But she willingly refused to accept those job offers. Hardly, anyone thinks of undertaking such a risk. Preeti risked it all for her once put off desire of settling in India had rekindled. Her dream was to start her own enterprise in her homeland. Thus, she returned India and established her own business which flourished, efficaciously.

Ramakrishna had retired from his job and was suffering from osteoporosis. His lean and weak body restricted him from milking the cows and riding bicycle. His money-grubbing sons thus sold the cows and orphaned him on a fateful day. Humiliated by the inhumane behaviour, Ramakrishna left the village. He went to the city in search of a job. But helpless Rama couldn’t seek any and moreover ran out of the little money he had within a week. Beside a traffic congestion, on a pavement Rama perched for some time and gulped water. His hands then caressed the photograph he saw everyday reminiscing Preeti. Alas! A heavy gust of wind blew away the photograph from his hands. The wind carried it through a car’s open window and placed it on a person’s lap seated on the driving seat of an Audi. The person turned it around and cheerfully exclaimed: “How cute the little girl in this picture is!”

On the spur of the moment, a fountain of childhood memories cascaded in the lady’s mind seated behind. She screamed: “Our Milkman”. She snatched the photo from her driver’s hand and ran towards the pedestrian. The lady was Preeti Arora, entrepreneur of a successful multinational company.

Tuesday, 15 May 2018

Prose 300 2018 Longlist

Prose 300 Winners
 
Drishti Nagdeo         Anila Mathew Vivek            Shloka Shankar        
Swatilekha Roy        Vaidyanathapuram Shankar

Rains by Drishti Nagdeo
If there’s something that can calm down the biggest of all storms, bring a smile on the saddest of all faces, or, beautify the disheveled, it is rains. It is purely divine. How confidently it assures that there is always respite after the scorching heat, euphoria after sadness! Rains make the trees greener than ever, the roads cleaner than ever, music and a cup of hot tea soothing than ever. It is a lullaby to the drowsy, a song to the dancer, music to the singer, romance to the lover, and, inspiration to the writer. Oh, what is it that the rains can’t do? It gives joy to the sad, relief to the tensed, hope to the disabled, and, belief to the incredulous. It assures a way to the confused and warmth of feeling to the cold. To be able to do a task, there must be willingness. Rains provide willingness to complete the tasks we’ve forever wanted to do but didn’t. Such is its beauty. Such is its charm. It can comfort the depressed. If the shattered still hopes, it is because of the rains. If magic and miracles have meaning, it is because of the rains.

Grief/Relief by Anila Mathew Vivek
Raman waited for the crows to arrive. The family clapped their hands and soon crows did eat the sacrificial offering. All agreed that Dakshayini Amma’s soul was indeed at peace.
Her only son Raman had performed all his duties in a dignified way, while his wife had ministered to her mother-in-law satisfactorily. The two grandchildren and spouses duly arrived for the well-attended funeral. All the arrangements had befitted the status of the family.
Raman looked at a nephew who was leaving for office after the ceremonies. On the spur of the moment, Raman called out: “Hey ! Wait up !”

He strode quickly while his wife looked inquiringly. Ignoring all questioning glances, Raman walked up panting to the young fellow, impatiently glancing at his mobile. “What is it Ramu ammava(uncle)? I am getting late for office…”

“Can you take me back home?” asked the bereaved son. Taken aback, his nephew answered puzzled, “But right now? Aren’t you all returning together?”
“No!” came the vehement reply. “I want you to take me on this bike-” replied his uncle. Raman lovingly stroked the machine.

Ceding to the unusual demand, his nephew gave him the mandatory helmet. As the bewildered family watched, Raman rode pillion with an unfathomable expression. Raman savoured the breeze, the jerks of the ride and the feel of the helmet, still wearing the wet mundu.

The only child of his parents, the precious heir had been kept away from all things “risky”; no riding bikes, no working away from home, no playing sports, no travelling…

The burden of love had been lifted. Instead of crushing grief, there was a sense of relief.

Saturday (A haibun) by Shloka Shankar
For as long as I can remember, I’ve more often than not met those special to me on a Saturday. Maybe it’s the convenience of a weekend or maybe it’s how it’s meant to be. I’ve not analysed it to death. At least, not yet. But it makes you think, doesn’t it? You look forward to that moment when everything arranges itself as if by magic and time slips past you in liquid anticipation. The small talk closes in on you and you’re worried about what to say next. How do you make yourself sound larger than you are? And then you realize you don’t need to. Here, it’s okay to not think, to lower your guard, be whole, be vulnerable, to just breathe.
                                                        heart sutra        untying the fabric of my universe

Bitter by Swatilekha Roy
These unending fields of plenty speak nothing of the girl with that sparkle in her eyes.  This is Idukki district of Kerala, where dreams get crushed faster than the traditional coffee beans it’s renowned for. They do talk of the boy, with skin darker than chocolate, who got lost in the web of his expectations. ‘The boy who wandered’, they call him.

To wander is to sway. To expect is to dare! Here, the world is oblivious of dares. The burden of an ancestral occupation sits heavy on its tilted back.

'The bitter, the better,' they prune leaves and sing in unison- men and women united by a common destiny. A destiny that sustains! Although, just. Now, it’s a disgrace that the girl, with kohl eyes and a spring to her walk, should think otherwise. Doesn’t she realise how shallow dreams are? Why does she ask them about the seven seas and poetry?

They listen as she sings off tune and whispers to the moon. “I’ll touch you. Someday.” The moon whispers back, when they aren’t peering. One day, just like the rest, her dreams will have blended with cold regret, as she keeps brewing endless warm pleasures for cocaine lovers over the world.

An Ex-Convict’s Tale by Vaidyanathapuram Shankar
Jaggu stepped out to freedom and inhaling the fresh air, looked around for his wife or teenage son. It was a great feeling- this freedom after the long spell in jail.

No one was in sight. He had so fondly waited for this moment, to meet his dear wife and only son. They were quite understandably angry at his criminal actions and hadn’t come to meet him during his jail confinement. But he really had hoped for their forgiveness, and presence here today.

As he trudged along disappointed, he saw Raghav, the last man he wished to see then. He sweated profusely as he saw Raghav approach him with rapid strides. ‘I am finished!” he thought, since Raghav was the man he had assaulted and also was the reason for his incarceration.

“Go ahead, Raghav, do it fast… Kill me!” said Jaggu, resignedly.
Raghav shrugged and said, “I could have done that long back if I wanted.”

Then he continued, “Believe me if you can; I am here to take you to my house, because your kin do not want you anymore. You may check with them, if you wish before coming with me.”
Jaggu, the hardened convict, wept for the first time in his life.